Oh, and I got this anonymous review on FFnet: "This is pretty good except shouldn't it be labeled romance? A warning that clothes will come off or something because this is more than hurt/comfort?"
The categories threw me a little bit, especially as there isn't really any actual 'hurt' in the story, but there isn't any actual romance in this short either - is there??? (Certainly not my idea of romance...)
Or did I not manage to make Gibbs as clinical and efficient as I intended, despite the fact that clinical and efficient was hinted as not exactly what either wanted?
If I finish the 'more' that is potentially there for this one, it will get into romance...
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Date: 2012-10-09 07:42 am (UTC)"This is pretty good except shouldn't it be labeled romance? A warning that clothes will come off or something because this is more than hurt/comfort?"
The categories threw me a little bit, especially as there isn't really any actual 'hurt' in the story, but there isn't any actual romance in this short either - is there??? (Certainly not my idea of romance...)
Or did I not manage to make Gibbs as clinical and efficient as I intended, despite the fact that clinical and efficient was hinted as not exactly what either wanted?
If I finish the 'more' that is potentially there for this one, it will get into romance...